Ive never posted here before and decided to post an unfunushed story im writing.. want to see what you all think of it. here yas go.
Honor Part 1 Ch.1
Lavitz.
The hero of the past.
Lavitz.
Cursed with amnesia.
Lavitz.
Misplaced in time.
Lavitz.
The blood knight !
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Lavitz walked down the corridor with unnatural stealth. Where he was he did not know... or care. He knew he was Lavitz. He knew about his sword Thulvius. But not of his past or why he has this strange Knight’s armor. His sword had a black dragon hilt with a unnatural shine to it. It was a single edged sword... But unusually sharp. The blade was inhumanly silver with a glint in it like no other. The sword was quite a piece of work. He marveled at the workmanship of it. The corridor was dark and damp, with the smell of death all over. He knew that smell well... but he did not know why. {have I killed someone before?} He pondered, then dropped the thought quickly. He couldn’t be a murderer.....Could he?
-- Altal (Altal444@netscape.net), September 15, 2002
no ones responding.... well, then heres the rest of it.
Honor Ch.1 (continued)
Lavitz looked won at his hands, flexing and unflexing them slowly.
No. If he was indeed a murderer, he there vowed that he would never
kill anything unless it had honor involved. He would not kill for
pleasure. He then changed his name. Lavitz it will stay, but from now
on I shall be called Honor. He nodded his head in silent
determination. And walked on with new energy, his armor making a
steady beat of clunks as if to say, “Don’t forget about me!” Suddenly
he saw a light, faint at first... but getting brighter as he walked.
He walked faster and faster until he finally broke into a run. His
feet hit the ground like pistons in a flat run, his sword biting into
his side as it’s sheath clanked into him. He suddenly felt a pain in
his heart... Couldn’t be mental though... it was too strong, too
vivid! He looked, and saw nothing. That was when he heard the gun
shot. BLAM!!! He unsheathed his sword and for some reason.. he didn’t
hear his footsteps. {Am i that stealthy?!? WHAT am i?!? } He thought.
He heard screams as he drew near to the enemy. He threw out his foot,
catching the unfortunate victim and slamming him forwards with such a
force he flew back ten feet before hitting the ground with a
sickening thud. Lavitz stood over the downed enemy and raised his
sword, ready to strike. “Please no, I thought you were trying to kill
me the way you were running. Please don’t hurt me !!! God, I have
children, think of them !!!!” None of this daunted him. He raised it
higher. “You would kill a father of a child and leave them with only
one parent? What a dishonorable...beast you are!” This got to him. It
cut him deep with an almost physical force, slicing his heart in
half. Lavitz’s eyes widened with horror at what he had almost
done. “run...” he said faintly. “Thank you, And God bless you.” He
bowed to Lavitz and ran.
-- Altal (Altal444@netscape.net), September 15, 2002.