Sunset picture in my backyard.

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http://image.pbase.com/u/surya/large/215117.sunset021.jpg

For a sunset picture this may not be that good, but I was surprised at the way this turned out, because my backyard is not anywhere like it looks here. I will post a followup picture of my backyard with full light later.

Comments please.

-- Surya Putrevu (sputrevu@hotmail.com), August 03, 2001

Answers

The shadows of the trees are nice, and you caught the sun in a good position. I think shifting a bit to the right would yield a better composition (of course I don't know what is there to the right of that tree...). The sky is a bit dull, though - I'd love to see it taken with more dramatic clouds. Overall I like it.

-- Tuvik Beker (tuvik@cns.tau.ac.il), August 04, 2001.

Thank you. I have taken many pictures at that time. others are located at http://www.pbase.com/surya/sunset

-- Surya (sputrevu@hotmail.com), August 04, 2001.

Here is one of them with the tree more towards the center.

http://image.pbase.com/u/surya/large/215108.sunset012.jpg

also here is a link for my backyard without the sunset for comparision.

http://image.pbase.com/u/surya/large/219611.P1010001.jpg

-- Surya (sputrevu@hotmail.com), August 04, 2001.


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