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Thanks to Uncle Deedah for the tip: Haiku being five, seven, five syllables for those who are interested.
First try rewriting
But now do people care here?
Elian the boy
What country to call his home?
Cuba son, Cuba.
-- Someone (ChimingIn@twocents.cam), April 23, 2000
Drudge says, "photos fake"
Instantly brought an uproar
Doth protest too much?
-- J (Y2J@home.comm), April 23, 2000.
Haiku: No one cares
dying art weeps in silence
Frank's poor eulogy
-- Someone (ChimingIn@twocents.cam), April 24, 2000.
Try a Tanka,Frank.
-- Ra (firstname.lastname@example.org), April 24, 2000.
Brain dead fools in evidence
Ra and Manny like soul brothers, reign
Where will it all end?
-- Observer (email@example.com), April 24, 2000.
The shock to hear my waitress
call another man
-- Lars (firstname.lastname@example.org), April 25, 2000.
Lars, I recommend
Boyle's book Descent of Man
Bizarre short stories
-- David L (email@example.com), April 25, 2000.