Short Poem by: Zack F. greenspun.com : LUSENET : Monster Rancher 2 : One Thread --------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Wings spread I venture through the sky A dart of light through the clouds

Over the fields across the earth

fire kite of magnificent creation

like a second sun

burning above

Guess what kind of monster this poem is about!

-- Zack F (fake@dontemailme.com), April 09, 2000

Answers A phoenix

-- Bloodshed (Bloodshed2@email.com), April 09, 2000.

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No, its got to be about a Gaboo!

-- Vheod (belgrath16@aol.com), April 09, 2000.

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HAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAYAHAHA...nice one Vhoed, but I would have gone with a mock on fire.

-- Magma Bird (flashrun@altavista.com), April 09, 2000.

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VERY NICE, ZACK! I like it. If you would care to publish such a work, take out unnecessary words like "a" and "the" when writing poetry. It would look like this:

Wings spread

I venture through the sky

Dart of light through clouds

Over fields

Across Earth

Fire kite of magnificent creation

Second sun

Burning above ______________________________________________________________________

That is poetry, my Friend! It is done quite adequately, too. I hope that you don't mind me fixing the tiny creases in it!

-- Eagle Fierce (Eagle1@Citynet.net), April 10, 2000.

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Nice poem. I think you should change the ending to, "like a second sun burning above God's own creation."

-- White Wolf (wolfsanity@mailcity.com), April 10, 2000.

-- Eagle Dewell Fierce (Eagle1@Citynet.net), April 12, 2000