Poem #2 (reposted)

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Poem #2 by: Zack F greenspun.com : LUSENET : Monster Rancher 2 : One Thread --------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Lumbering Hulk of power I remain a peaceful soul

like a mountain

I stand tall

Granite strength and focused eyes

Guess what monster this poem is about!

-- Zack F (fake@dontemailme.com), April 09, 2000

Answers A golem

-- Bloodshed (Bloodshed2@email.com), April 09, 2000.

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A Golem or a Rock Dragon

-- CHB (cyberhillbilly@yahoo.com), April 09, 2000.

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Once again, its a Gaboo!

-- Vheod (belgrath16@aol.com), April 09, 2000.

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Remove the word "like" fromthe third stanza. Other than that, it isn't bad. It's also not as passionate as your first one, though.

-- Eagle Fierce (Eagle1@Citynet.net), April 10, 2000.

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Eagle-Your critiqueing is much appreciated but keep in mind that I wrote all of these in about a half an hour max.

-- Zack F (fake@dontemailme.com), April 10, 2000.

-- Eagle Dewell Fierce (Eagle1@Citynet.net), April 12, 2000


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