I've just recently bought an SLR and began taking pictures with a more deliberate mentality than most snapshots dictate. I just got my first roll of film developed and I'd appreciate some blunt criticism of a couple of images from that roll. I put them up under Philip's new photodb system on photo.net. http://http://www.photo.net/photodb/folder.tcl?folder_id=221. The first photo is dead because the system won't let me delete it. Anyway, I'd really appreciate honesty. I spent much of my college years workshopping poetry and fiction and learned the most when people spoke their minds. Thanks in advance.

-- O.M. Jenkins (omjenkins@cs.csoft.net), October 04, 1999

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Pay more attention to the edges, if you want them to be significant with info, be more definate. If you want them to serve as a frame, make them cleaner...t

-- tom meyer (twm@mindspring.com), October 05, 1999.