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Elan IIe, 75-300 USM, Kodak RG200, scanned from negative. All comments are appreciated.

-- Amy Boone (boone@chem.ufl.edu), October 04, 1999

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I really like your idea here, but I don't think it quite turned out how you wanted it.

The circle that is formed by the bird and its reflection is really cool, but I think the cropped tail of the bird and missing top (bottom?) half of the reflection negate the feeling of balance that the circle initiates.

Also, the bird blends into the rock a little bit much for my taste, and another angle might have eliminated the rock, singling out the bird.

Don't get me wrong here...I like the picture, but think it could have been executed better. Like so many of my own attempts, I think this was a great idea, but didn't turn out exactly the way you expected it to.

-- Jeremy Kindy (kindjd01@wfu.edu), October 05, 1999.


Nice, but the stump keeps the bird from grabbing my full attention. Also seems a bit contrasty and blured. Keep up the good efforts!

-- Larry Korhnak (lvk@gnv.ifas.ufl.edu), October 06, 1999.

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