Egrets at Dawn

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Egrets at Dawn



-- Steven Sisti (stevesisti@aol.com), September 18, 1999

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I like the basics of the shot, especially the reflection. But, I would have cropped a little more off of the top, closer to the birds heads, and this scan is VERY soft.

-- sheldon hambrick (shambric@us.oracle.con), September 18, 1999.

Like the composition. The light and/or the scan holds it back.

-- Larry Korhnak (lvk@gnv.ifas.ufl.edu), September 19, 1999.

Steven, I agree with Sheldon that this photo would look better with much of the top cropped off. The image has some great qualities to it, the position of the birds, the ripples in the water, the color. It does look a little soft, but in this case I don't think it distracts from the feel of the photo. Donna

-- Donna P. Bollenbach (cassidy@icubed.net), September 19, 1999.

Intresting subject , but perhaps composition could have been simplified. The strong lines (necks) draw the eye in two different directions! On my monitor it's too dark ..

keep shooting.

-- santanu (santanu_nag@hotmail.com), September 20, 1999.


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