Evening Clouds in Darwin Australia

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Taken with a Nikkormat EL w/24mm soligor, 1/2sec @ f22 or something like that. Fuji Velvia. My first post so any comments, suggestions etc very welcome!

-- Paul Thomsen (paul@nungalinya.edu.au), September 09, 1999

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Nice white page, where is the photo? Pat

-- pat j. krentz (krentz@cci-29palms.com), September 10, 1999.

Very nice, I would suspect that you used a graduated filter of some type since you have more color in the reflection than is in the sky. Nicely framed with the leaves. What were you trying to acheive? Pat

-- pat j. krentz (krentz@cci-29palms.com), September 10, 1999.

No filters Pat.. the water was like a dark tea colour and seemed to reflect the sky with nice darker richer colours. If I did it again, I'd probably remove the palm leaf from the foreground and maybe crop the left hand border a bit...

-- Paul Thomsen (paul@nungalinya.edu.au), September 10, 1999.

The palm leaf in the lower left corner helps balance the tree framing the top of the photo. Well done.

-- Darron Spohn (sspohn@concentric.net), September 10, 1999.

This is a very nice shot. It gives me the quiet, calm feeling. I too find it strange that there is a lot more color in the reflection though (not that I am suggesting that the colors are added artificially).

-- Shun Cheung (shun@worldnet.att.net), September 10, 1999.


A nice, peaceful and colorful image. The branch to the left is a little too much for my taste. Thanks for sharing

-- Bahman Farzad (exposeit-right@spotmetering.com), September 11, 1999.

You've captured the feel of this place and time well. I find it interesting to see photos from all over the world, it seems as if not only the terrain, form, color of the natural elements vary, but the essence of the light does as well. Thanks for sharing, Donna

-- Donna P. Bollenbach (cassidy@icubed.net), September 12, 1999.

Great exposure, wonderful subject, truly beautiful, but I don't think the branch works well as a frame. I think it upsets the peaceful symmetry you have going in the rest of the picture. Still a great image.

-- David W. Griffin (RedDrake@aol.com), September 14, 1999.

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