Mangroves, John Pennekamp State Park, FL

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-- Lyn Lord (LynLord@aol.com), April 09, 1999

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Lyn-

A valiant effort. I can see what you were trying to accomplish with this shot, but it just doesn't seem to work. Uh, I think part of it is because there seems to be some lack of detail in a few shadows.

I also think that if there were more contrast, maybe it would be a little more jumpier.

Good try though!!

-- Jason Fobart (jason@fobart.net), April 09, 1999.


This is potentially very nice, what I think has decreased the image's effectivness here the the almost black areas on both sides of the middle. I hope your original has more detail and open tones there.

Frank

-- Frank Kolwicz (bb389@lafn.org), April 09, 1999.


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