Soft and bright...

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-- Jack Kennealy (jackk@agate.net), January 29, 1999

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Very nice.

Good work.

-- Keith Clark (ClarkPhotography@spiritone.com), January 29, 1999.


This is wild and beautiful. I love the colors and abstraction. Thanks for sharing.

-- Bahman Farzad (cpgbooks@mindspring.com), January 29, 1999.

What a wonderful image! Thank you for taking the time to share this image.

Paul

-- Paul Sedillo (dio@5150.net), January 30, 1999.


Nothing to say but "Me too." Wonderful!

-- Garry Schaefer (schaefer@pangea.ca), January 30, 1999.

Thank you, all, for the kind remarks. Although it is certainly gratifying to have one's images appreciated by others, I would love to have some critique here too. For example, would this image be improved by slightly more depth-of-field - giving a little greater visibilty to the other two dew drops to the right (all natural, incidentally)? And couldn't I have improved the framing a bit by moving myself slightly to the right so that the in-focus dew drop was centered in front of that darker diagonal region? Please do give me the benefit of some objective critique!

-- Jack Kennealy (jackk@agate.net), January 31, 1999.


For me the dew drop is to centered. I would like it slightly more to the right. The two other points that catch my attention are the soft colours and the contrasting sharp "spikes". I would like to see the shot from slightly to the left silhouetting the spikes by the dew drop aginst the upper right light coloured area. The depth-of-field works well enough for me. Very nice shot BTW. Details? How much more depth could you have gotten?

Cheers

-- Bill Wyman (Bill.Wyman@utas.edu.au), February 01, 1999.


Jack,

I'll ask you what my mentor used to ask me, "What is the subject?" There seems to be a lot competing for the viewer's interest. What was it about this scene that caught your eye?

--Les

-- Les Saucier (skincamp@skybest.com), February 02, 1999.


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