-- James Fazio (triathlete@vt.edu), November 09, 1998

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Taken with 50mm f1.4 with 27.5mm extension tube, flash, RDP II, tripod and cable release. The scan is really crummy and I think it is just that my scanner doesn't like me and refuses to pick up fine details. The front stamin (sp?) is full of detail on the slide. I guess I am more interested in what all of you think compositionally. Thanks.

-- James Fazio (triathlete@vt.edu), November 09, 1998.

James,

I see where your headed stylistically with this, but IMO your not quite there yet. The composition sees too tight. It needs some breathing space. Bahmad has had some photographs along this style. Perhaps he can give more useful advice then I.

-- Paul Lenson (lenson@pci.on.ca), November 10, 1998.