i, too, have struggled with this image, but in a different fashion. i am reluctant to post unfavorable observations in a forum such as this, primarily because i certainly can claim no right of judgment based upon the superiority of my own work. still, i must say that the whole thing just doesn't work for me. the image appears cluttered and technically inept. i can see the possibilities of the concept, but the end result is simply a weak photograph, in my view. sorry.(posted 8738 days ago)