Response to La Paz

It's a little soft, and has an overall purple-pink tinge, but the intent and feel shine through. I think it would be much stronger if you could lose the two jeans-clad people on the left, or at least the guy in the background, who drags my eye away from the shoe-shiner. Without them, you'd still have a sense of someone busy in a crowd, but with a stronger composition.

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