(posted 8403 days ago)Oh, wow! Remind me not to cross that guy...
Seriously: Your model is great, the expression is fantasic, and the face is wonderfully lit! Well done!!
Now, if I had to critisise something then it would be the deep shadow by his left hand, which I find somewhat disturbing. His neck turns into an blob where it merges with the hand. I'm not quite sure how to fix it: a reflector, perhaps, but without adding to the light on the face which is just so right. Certainly keep the fingers with the hand, and not down the neck.
And if I had to nit-pick: fix the shirt sleeve on the right hand. Tape down the opening or something...
But I like it -- honest!