the first one

that's pretty much how I saw it: contemplative gorilla/hurly burly people keeping eachother aggravated and claustrophobic. I was also going for a bit of 'visual rhyme' between the gorilla and the most clearly defined man's face (guy looking over his shoulder) that you can see reflected in the glass. Now that I've tipped my hat like this, here's my question: is this photograph successful? If not, why not? (and don't worry about my feelings, nothing better than brutal but right-on criticism). Thanks for the responses so far.

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