I think the crop reduces the sense of movement, and so much so that the motion blur then becomes an annoyance instead of a cue.(posted 8523 days ago)My eye keeps trying to make sense of the brightest blob top centre. Burning it down a tad to match the two at the bottom helps. Another tiny nit is that her smile looks the teensiest bit forced, but not badly so.
In any case a great 'on the day' shot to mix in with the more static formals.