I like it, but I don't like how the eyes are aligned. The alignment disturbs me. Because of the shape of her skull, the tilt of her head, and her expression, her eyes arrange themselves into almost a cubist like form, giving the illusion that one eye is significantly higher than the other.(posted 8527 days ago)If you do a quick exercise, and cover one eye with the palm of your hand (either the left or the right), your aesthetic sense sort of says, "ahh, ok, what I imagine the other eye to look like is this." unfortunately, when I move my hand away again, the other eye doesn't fit the description my mind made up.
I guess this would appeal to my aesthetic sense more if she were to tilt her head to make the eyes line up in a line parallel with the bottom of the frame.
But then again I'm nitpicking :)