(posted 8546 days ago)The light is great. I'm impressed. Having tried to photograph bands in what is usually under-lit and very un-evenly lit conditions, I'm impressed with what you have achieved.
But I agree with Tony that the composition leaves something to be desired.... Try to focus on lust one of the players. The guy has a fine expression which would have made a suitable image. Get the artists closer (ask them?) or get further away (yeah, I know the light is going to be a problem...)