Response to The Mabels

Probably a small nit-pick, but I think the subjects are too far apart, too close to the right and left borders of the photograph with not very interesting material in between them. I think the solution would have been to take individual photographs of each subject. Alternatively, perhaps changing your viewpoint to one side or another, or to wait for the two people to get closer together. There isn't really enough space around the "hands playing the guitars" to provide an effective balance, namely his, but also hers a bit. As it is, then, the composition is slightly awkward. It's not a bad photograph, though. Isn't that film nice? I think the tonality, sharpness, (and all that) are all pretty good.

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