(posted 8576 days ago)Mmm, I like the tones of this picture -- it has a nice quality to it. You do your own development and printing?
I can see why you wanted to crop the image: it's a shame that you didn't turn the camera slightly to the right: those two women are great. On the other hand, having them there -- litterally on the edge -- does add a certain tension to the image.
With the composition you have chosen, is it possible to get a little more detail in the left-bottom corner. Looking very closely at my monitor, there does seem to be information there that could be brought out by the printing (or digitally).
But: it's a great moment you have captured and I really like your image.
Yes, I'm back again... There is still no preview, is there?