The subjects are not prominent enough, and the object that is prominent isn't very interesting. I don't understand the title, and maybe think that titles, this one in particular, can do more damage than good.(posted 8590 days ago)But this is the kind of critique that I fear the most, and so I commend you for suffering this one. Keep going, Struan. My response here is offered with the greatest of respect, and I await an equally straight-in critique from you some time!!