subject?

I agree with John about the intent of this image. What is the subject of the image? The room or the person? If the latter then the person should have been very close to the camera probably a half body shot with the rest of the room receding into the distance. A little shorter focal length lens would have enhanced this idea of this receding space. But as is it is just a snapshot of a room with no appeal. Too much clutter with nothing interesting to keep you there. Very undramatic lighting also. On the otherhand if this is a shot of the room, what is this one person doing here? Just another distraction. A few people, some sitting reading and some standing in the background talking to show the warmth of the setting would make a better composition. This image is too static and very dim. I hope this doesn't offend you. It is only my interpretation of this image. James

[ Previous | Next ]