My only criticism would be that the fabric is too busy and distracting. Try a mono-toned damask or linen or solid velvet or burlap or anything that supports the ambiance (polywog a ding dong anyone?) but is not more prominent than your subject. Supportive but not distracting. I've got rolls and wads of various fabrics from the rements bin for just these occasions.(posted 8801 days ago)I like the light and the mood/attitude. And maybe place her face a bit further left in the frame (who cares about that damn pillow thing, lets see more human! People Photography, not Pillow Photography!) Maybe just a healthy burn on the pillow might help and while yer drinking, try some of thet Ilford SFX stuff with a fat red filter, you'll like the skin tones and it'll be a whole stop (50!) faster... t