I agree t, and not much balance or compositional symmetry in it either(a very disturbing amount of bilateral)....again Peter and I'm trying as hard as I can to be constructive ....but they are so overwrought and manufactured that any mystery/titillation is killed by melodrama. Plus I can't get around the tilted cinema veritae horizon...it's just so 80's. Primarily it's the balance...this one is much better than the other but neither are up to intriguing me. What would I do differently? most of it is just in composition...(posted 8836 days ago)