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Response to Foreground objects in portraits

from Steven Myers (smyers@adamswells.com)
Usually a portrait is to show something about the person or the persons personality. To me the branches in front of her face are distracting and don't contribute anything to the composition or subject. I would also have to agree with Allen about the uneven lighting. Maybe you could move the light back farther on her left side to highlight her hair rather then the side of her face so much. Also I think the position of her left hand is a little distracting. Especially the loose thumb. Other wise you have done well and have a fine model, but think you could do better. Good Luck.
(posted 8818 days ago)

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